Rok Caladera

an ongoing character sketch for the 2nd character of my new book (which i will start after I finish OWN)

He carved his heart of stone

Out of

Cardboard and duct tape,

Which weakened when the

Night began to weep.

 

He put up a face of a

True night-man’s glare,

And when anyone asked,

He’d pretend he didn’t care,

But faces are always more

Open than they appear.

 

He had eyes of gray and

Hair of

Painted black,

And to the girl who hid

Inside his doors

He was a puzzle to

Pull apart.

 

With piano keys and

Flashbulb dreams,

They both chased

After those

Who stole his

Flesh and blood

Heart.

 

Author's Note

not finished yet...
don't worry! i am going to finish writing One Week's Notice before this. I just like to plot my next book out before i finish the one i'm working on so that i don't have dead time. and i'm about 3/5 or so done w/ OWN

Reviews

[Sara]

With piano keys and

Flashbulb dreams,

that part is really unique- i cant wait for you to finish this, it seems sort of dark and romantic, but in an artistic sense, not overly gothic but beautifully disturbing- you know what i mean?

anyway i like it- can't wait for more!