Tuesday night

this one makes even less sense...

It all leads back—

All leads back to Tuesday night...

Tuesday night

And

We drown in fright.

This is the end—

This is the night.

 

This is the night,

Turn out the light

And let all of our dreams fade to naught:

Give in to what we’ve always fought.

 

It all leads back—

All bleeds black—

All to Tuesday night,

When we dreamed in fright,

When we ran in fright

And claimed shame for our name—

On Tuesday night

Nothing more than shame as our name.

 

And all we want to do is

Turn on the light,

Stay and fight:

Keep on fighting

The fear we’ve always fought.

 

Author's Note

does it need another stanza?

Reviews

[Dressed in Poetry]

I love this:
"It all leads back-
All bleeds black-"
I think it sounds done, but another stanza wouldn't hurt, I don't think. But then, I like it the way it is too. Basically, if you come up with something good, go ahead and do it.