My Prayer

Reviews

[KAREN BROWN]

wow beautifully written. I felt the same when my parents both passed but i know there ok and in a safe and better place,I know in my heart GOD took away all her pain,and there together again.So much love and emotion in this it made me think and cry. Keep writing great job. karen Do you think you could take a look at mine I would love to hear what you have to say, weather theres something wrong or not with mine .I really need to know I would appreicate it a lot thank you.

[Tovli]

so filled with yearing, sadness, yet filled with hope. tovli

[Deborah Shepard]

reflective sis sadness hugs

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A beautiful poem. I feel so sad for you, I hope things get better with time. And thank you so much for your kindness. Debileah

[BrightEyes]

my mom passed away over ten years ago - and I still think of her everyday...this is such a poignant piece - we want to believe they are so better off and mostly we do - but sometimes - it is impossible not to wonder how our loved ones are when we can longer just ask them...a truly beautiful piece.

[Emmie M]

Its touching. I totally understand what you're going through. It's hard. When I was 8 my mother passed away after gastric bypass. For you, the grieving process might not be over. Hang in there. Ray Hamilton is right, it's better to know about the tragedy than to be blind to the truth, and find out on your own. You'll be upset, but it saves relationships with your family from excess anger, betrayl, and distrust.
The poem itself was absolutely reflective. Anyone who reads it will think long and hard about what you have writen. Hang in there my friend! Good job! Keep writing, and if you ever need to talk, I am always here for you!
=)Have a super day!

[Ray Hamilton]

The loss of a loved one is hard enough
But not knowing what happened makes it a lot worse
Believe me I know
I love you when you go to bed
I don't want to ever see you again in the morning
Figure that one out
Ray

[alyssa]

love it ...so sweet!!!!!!