I have to agree with Helena. It's impossible to be a friend to someone who has bashed your heart to the floor. It's like...you can never go there again. And trying to be friends only brings back memories of a time when you were the only love in his life...and you keep remembering the promises that were broken that broke your heart, and you live that pain all over again.
Love/Liz/Sis
such a sad write..i know that pain well myself..having been through it..how it hurts when you give your heart and get nothing in return, especially your first love..i turned my hurt to anger..for several years..but that wasn't hurting anyone but myself..it's a hard turn around..but..glad we both made it..enjoyed your write :-)
Tissue alert Sue! So sad, but written so well. It was amazing how you
penned so much emotion onto the page, making this into a fantastic
outstanding poem!
Your first line stood out for me. I too think when you have loved someone
so much and they ask to still be friends, well....that's not on, how CAN you
go back to being friends when you gave away your heart completely and it was just
broken in two by that person and thrown back in your face....
I have one of my works published in the Digital Passions Poetry Magazine,
and one in the Reflections On The Web book.
I've been writing, since I was a teenager, but didn't get serious about
w.. more..