A Lovers Dream

A Lovers Dream

A Poem by Suelou

© 2008 Suelou


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I think the key word here is HAD. It's strange how our concept of what is real love and commitment changes over time when we start seeing so many elements that do not fit the dream. I suppose it's as easy to fall out of love as it is to fall in...especially when the changes do not fit our ideals. A very lovely write Sue...highly charged with emotion and regret.
Love...liz

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very romantic write and most beautifully presented, too! This is the kind of poem that leaves me feeling as warm and wonderful inside. Thank you for joining this week's Keeping the Dream Alive challenge. :-) Sharon

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is well written and beautiful. It's cool how you put the background thing.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 23, 2008
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