Dear God

Dear God

A Poem by Suelou

 

Oh my, Dear God you know

What’s in my heart, today

The pain that I am feeling

And that I’m not okay

 

I’ve cried a million tears, it seems

But still, it hurts me just the same

This heart of mine is truly torn

That this man has passed away

 

I can still see his smiling face

When I walked into his room

The glitter in his eyes

Could light up the entire room

 

My heart is hurting me so bad

That he up and passed away

You are the only one, Dear God

Who knows, I’m not okay

 

The pain I tried to hide today

Because for me they really cared

So for them, the tears I kept hid

As long as I was there

 

No one even knows how bad

I ‘m truly hurting deep inside

Or how many, many tears

I have really cried

 

Right now, it feels as if

The pain will never go away

And, it is my greatest fear

This pain is here to stay

 

2-20-08

© 2008 Suelou


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This poem is so heartbreaking, a very good write. Prayers to you, Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 16 Years Ago


full with grief, yet a light burns deep between the words. nicely done. tovli

Posted 16 Years Ago


beauty etched , grieving is so hard angels light your world

Posted 16 Years Ago


Words from a grieving heart, and who'd know better than God, the pain and hurt of losing someone so close to you. It touched me dear, beautiful and heart felt!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Sue this is truly a wonderful heartfelt cry you have so beautifuly written. Keep writing through your pain dear friend. Hugs Helena

Posted 16 Years Ago



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