What  Do the Angels Think?

What Do the Angels Think?

A Poem by Jared

We live.
We die.
Everyday,millions prosper and perish.
Everyday,we gamble with the velvet red dice of life,enticing  and beautiful.
Everyday, we kill each other,with the tools of gun and fire.
Everyday,we destroy each other with our poisonous words.
Everyday,we  steal,we cheat and lie in hopes of saving ourselves.
Amidst this cold,cruel world filled with all this evil...what is there to live for?
Live for the charity workers.
Live for the teachers.
Live for the sunsets.
Live  for dreams.
I can't help wondering...
What do the Angels think of us?

© 2010 Jared


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100 out of 100
you have a way with words line sometimes so simple ( well really simple words) make such an impression in our minds.
I wrote an two page poem (thou haven't written a poem in a long time so thats my excuse) trying to explain humanity in its bad times,
you make it seem really easy, how do you do it? (flattery is no lie, but its coming from a girl who thinks compliments are sarcastic and sarcasm is flattery, ha X] ) I think I should stay away from coffee....
Its awesome! (darn keep staying away from the path :) ) but thats what I get for being up at 5:06 am with out sleep!) cant wait to read more!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Hi,my name is Jared. Writing you could say is a great passion of mine. I have been writing for a while. I am also involved in the speech and forensic team at my school. I also have a youtube chan.. more..

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