Shattered

This just happened and the amount it hurt took me by surprise :(

Glass can take a lot.

The violent strike of a malevolent hammer.

THe cool,quick precise arrow,shot from a far.

Near endless blows will come,but the glass shall remain whole.

But,after a  eon or more...

something begins to change.

The glass begins to crack,to shake it's  solid foundation.

And then it comes..

That one blow that shatters it.

Maybe not that hard,but swift and violent enough to send millions of pieces shards  soaring down..

Farther and Farther.

I don't care anymore.

Reviews

[The Queen of Pentacles]

I just might go cry in a corner and turn emo because of how seemingly dark this poem is! Thanks! thanks alot!

ha,Just kidding, :)
I don't cry, well in corners any way.
And as far as poems goes,Ive read some good poems from really depressed people tiring to be deep,but this is actually tops it,nice even thou I've just got done writing about how you should smile at the world.... ha I'm off track now! :)

[Roxie Demonia]

wow i like it

[Sharkapillar]

Wow. Strong piece, makes a great point. The last line is the strongest. Great job. ♥
Blessed be,
Rabbit