Day without Night.

Without the night,

the cool,crisp,respite of all,

the Earth would be hard,cracked,

baked to a crisp.

No  plants would grow.

No Life would live.

Without the day,

the basking rays of the divine sun,

the world would be cold and frozen.

The arctic winds would blow eternally  over the once baked continent of Africa.

No plants would grow.

No Life would live.

Without one.

Without the other.

The outcome is the same.

Neither are complete.

Like a puzzle  strewn by a irate tyrant,

tossed across the globe.

Reviews

[The Queen of Pentacles]

Dame and in school all they tell us is : we as humanity would be screwed with out night! or day,
end of story.
this really puts it in a nice perspective,teachers could use this....
1It just keeps on getting better!Thou this one seems to be on a soft delicate tone,the words are tides against it so it crumbles into a great work1
writers beg for criticism ( I know I do)to get better,but theres nothing for you.

[Kesha]

Wow this is really good, I like it, I think you could have gone without 'cracked' at the beginning though, other than that it's a great read!

[Hardnock32]

It is mediocre at best. It isn't horriblle, but you really need to work on your writing skills. I've read better.

[Jared]

Okay guys,. I'm sorry! I accidentally marked this as a story!