Lyran

Lyran

A Poem by Jared
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To Julie written rom the contester Shakespear left out.

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Dear Juliet,
My sweet,sweet Juliet.
I write to you today
to tell you of my love 
for you.
That if Romeo was to die
i would be there.
That when tragedy would strike.
I would be there.
With bitter remorse and regret,
I know we can never be together.
Not in the way in which i desire.
For another suitor as stolen your heart.
And i am left alone.
Remember.
I will be their.
May God bless you.

© 2010 Jared


Author's Note

Jared
I just thought this would be fun to write,to add my part to a classic. If i get a positive response,i might do more like this. Review please!

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This was a really great poem with few mistakes. Write more often! Bye


Posted 14 Years Ago


How beautiful. Nice word flow and good word use. I like it =D

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awe!
It's so romantic ans sweet! I love this poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very romantic!
Please add more,
my eye would sing cause the wording is so pleasing. the flow is softing.very sweet!
just one thing1 in the description :
''To Julie written rom the contester Shakespear left out.''
so is rom an lover Shakespeare left out? just was confused on that :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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