Their Own Little World

People today

live in a seclusion

completely obscured from

the rest of society 

Although it doesn't matter

if they are separated

because everyone else is too

People  have become

singular

Alone

Self reliant.

They are  completely unaware

of everyone

of everything

but,maybe,there are a few.

Who care

Who realize the importance of unity.

 

In my opinion

we need each other

No amount of

technolgy or time will change

that.

Reviews

[MissWordSmith]

this reminded me of my poem "You've Begun To Drown" i liked the beginning...however at the end i thought it was a little too much like a plain statement...not poetry neither prose.