Memories

Memories

A Poem by Jared
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I decided to just let my hands touch the keyboard and see what came out.

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I feel like
I'm missing something
It must be important
Or would i be looking for it?

It teeters at the edge of  my mind
like a piece of  me
just out of reach

Essential,yet separated.
I need it to be part of me.
Yet it is lost,like a scattered leaf
in the a August breeze

Will I ever find it?
I start to wonder now  if it even matters
Whether i have it or not
Is it worth the effort
to look for this memory?

© 2010 Jared


Author's Note

Jared
Ignore any grammar please. Just tell me what ay think! Your opinion matter to me!

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you always ask good questions in your poems...
especially loved these lines...

"It must be important
Or would i be looking for it?"

Posted 14 Years Ago


"It teeters at the edge of my mind
like a piece of me
just out of reach"
I love this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i like it XD

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like the style you used and the structure. I think this is a good write and honestly you made my poems look like crap.(:

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 9, 2010
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Hi,my name is Jared. Writing you could say is a great passion of mine. I have been writing for a while. I am also involved in the speech and forensic team at my school. I also have a youtube chan.. more..

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