Prologue

The chapters will be split as Joe and Amanda will each have their own chapters in their own point of view.

The names Amanda Nicole Pimentel. I’m from Rhode Island. it’s pretty much hell on earth to me. I was trapped. As I grew up I felt empty, as if there was something so crucial that was missing. The problem is that I had no idea what that missing thing was. I guess I never realized what that feeling was, well not till I was 14. It started with a voice, then a look, then BAM it hit me. I was in love with the boy on TV.

I remember the first day I saw him, the very first day. I remember every detail every feeling I had. It was his voice I heard first. The most beautiful voice I ever heard honestly, that’s how I still feel till this very day. I heard it while I was grabbing out a bottle of soda from my fridge. I froze as if something told me “look at the TV” so I did; and his eyes were what I saw. First it was those eyes, beautifully chocolate brown eyes that made my whole body feel as if it was melting. Then that smile; It was a smirk to be exact. Those pink lips making a half smile as the camera filmed him and his brothers. That hawk that lay perfectly on his head, that hair was so beautiful as well. His grace and poise, he was like an angel sent from above. He was perfectly perfect. I had to know more. So that’s what I did, I found out more.

 

He seemed goofy and sweet. A little nutter. He was perfect for me though. From the start I saw his imperfections but then again, I thought they were all beautiful. Something unexplainable came over me that day. I still don’t know what; only thing I did know was that I had to make him mine. I wouldn’t go on with my life with out him.

I know I couldn’t because well, I already tried. I tried to stop thinking about him based on fear. I feared him; I feared these feelings for someone I never actually met face to face. Yet he was always on my mind. I had crushes, got my heart broken, and I was always called “Not good enough” my whole life, and of course I always fell back to him. I didn’t know why. When I wasn’t thinking about him I got dragged up into bad choices; very bad choices. He was like my savior though. He was there even with out realizing it. My mission was to meet him. But then, what if he doesn’t feel our connection… it is a connection, right? It has to be. If not, then I’m a loon.

Author's Note

The chapters will be split as Joe and Amanda will each have their own chapters in their own point of view.

Reviews

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I love the description you used here. Even though I already know what he looks like, the description makes it easy for one who has no idea what he looks like to picture him:

"First it was those eyes, beautifully chocolate brown eyes that made my whole body feel as if it was melting. Then that smile; It was a smirk to be exact. Those pink lips making a half smile as the camera filmed him and his brothers. That hawk that lay perfectly on his head, that hair was so beautiful as well. His grace and poise, he was like an angel sent from above. He was perfectly perfect. I had to know more. So that’s what I did, I found out more."

I really loved this part (it's funny, and true):

"He seemed goofy and sweet. A little nutter. He was perfect for me though."

This is a really good prologue. It doesn't give away a lot about the story, just who your love interest is and an introduction of your girl. Very well written.

By the way, this is one-hundred percent true (said with love, love):

"I'm a loon."

I love it (and you)! Please, continue to publish more!