I Am

We had to do this for class, so I decided to put it up here!

I Am

By Nora Grey

I am beautiful and fragile

I wonder if I'll ever be picked

I hear the whispering wind, like a silent rumor

I see never ending fields

I want to be gathered up like a hug

I am beautiful and fragile

I pretend to be perfect

I feel small 

I touch the ground, as cold as ice

I worry I'm useless

I cry when I blow away with the wind

I am beautiful and fragile

I am beautiful and fragile 

I understand that I'm only a small part of this world

I say that I can take it

I dream that I can make it

I try to hold it together, like a ribbon holding together a box

I hope to be accepted

I am a flower

Author's Note

So we had to add four similes, so if some of the lines are awkward, just tell me and deal with it.. :0 :)

Reviews

[Nora Grey]

Thanks, my teacher said it was okay, but I won't know her complete review until this week. I really appreciate this, I was trying to do something no one else in my class would dare do.

[Hello, Goodbye]

I love the honest and openness.. The recurring images you utilize are effective and pronounced.