See, Be

See, Be

A Poem by Slithering Angel

/See, Be/

In the darkness I see
The way I should be
How everyone wants
I don't wanna be

In the rain drops I see
The pain of you and me
The wind howling
I don't wanna see

When Hell freezes over and my fire's gone out
Than I'll see, than I'll be
Until that day, I'll wait under the tree
Until you see

In the miasma of my inadequacies
I can't see, can't breathe
In the face of your mistakes
I'm losing myself, such high stakes

Like double jeoperdy, our lives go round
Russian roulette, a funeral tune with no sound
You're drowning in yourself, you can't touch the ground
But you still don't see how you really should be

In your face I see
How I never want to be
The slope getting steeper
As I realize that I really don't want to see, but I still don't wanna be me
 

© 2009 Slithering Angel


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I enjoyed it. I know I'm that sick. Your words hold a certain awe when wrapped inside your greif. This is how I see your poem: Longing to be with the one you love, who can't understand his feelings. You don't want to be who you are, but also you know that who you are is what your meant to be. Am I right?

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Slithering Angel

12 Years Ago

I can't believe it took me what, two years, to respond to your review. Your words are absolutely spo.. read more



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You have a way with words, the poem flowed really nicely. It was very natural and not forced like some poems are. I could see this as a lyrical song also.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love trees...

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Slithering Angel

12 Years Ago

Then we're happily agreed. :-)
Pi Cee

12 Years Ago

We are. =)
A place where we have all dwelled at one time or another. Your piece, crafted well, depicts how being who you are can be the hardest to achieve... Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Slithering Angel

12 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. I really appreciate it.
Priscilla Sayers

12 Years Ago

My pleasure.
I enjoyed it. I know I'm that sick. Your words hold a certain awe when wrapped inside your greif. This is how I see your poem: Longing to be with the one you love, who can't understand his feelings. You don't want to be who you are, but also you know that who you are is what your meant to be. Am I right?

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Slithering Angel

12 Years Ago

I can't believe it took me what, two years, to respond to your review. Your words are absolutely spo.. read more

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Added on September 19, 2009

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Slithering Angel
Slithering Angel

Harlem, GA



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I'm twenty-one, I enjoy writing, playing games of any kind, and I'm pretty friendly. ^^ I'm kind of terrible with technology of any kind and I'm a real life-introvert, but online-extrovert. It's easie.. more..

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