Giving up

Sadness brought to the heart

I'm giving up on you,

You've brought me so much pain,

But when you look at her it makes my heart ache.

When you said you loved me, 

In the moment it felt so real,

You held me tightly throughout the night,

And whispered words of love into my ear.

You can't take back what you said.

I'm not risking my body for you anymore;

That's what you were after anyway.

I'm done with listening to you,

And you don't give a s**t  about my feelings anyway.

You've abused my heart and soul,

It hurts when you touch me,

Your too rough with me ,

you treat me like a toy,

I'm giving up on you,

Forever.

Author's Note

Please ignore typos, what do you think of the poem?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

When love is heartless and cold. It isn't love.
"Your too rough with me ,
you treat me like a toy,
I'm giving up on you,
Forever."
The above lines. Honest feel and tone. Sometime we must give-up and run. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[A.R. Rose]

Thank you for the review, this poem was inspired by my sister Lilith , and her boyfriend only used her for her body, soon afterwards she told him how she felt and they agreed not to see each other again.

[Coyote Poetry]

You did very well and you are welcome.