A love scene

Elena's jaw was lightly trembling ; he was so close. He gently cupped her chin in his hands , then tucked some strands of her curls behind her ear. "You're so damn cute." Just those words coming out of his mouth made her weak in the knees. "Look at me , Elena." This whole time she was avoiding eye contact with him ; slowly , she turned her sight towards him . She loved every single inch of his masculine body . His sky blue eyes, his raven hair , his soft lush lips. Elena could not resist him. As he held her close, he muttered in her ear, "I love you," "I love you so damn much" .

With those words ,he smashed his lips against hers, their hearts both leaking with overflowing love for one another. Elena pulled away and started to cry , "What's wrong?" he asked . With tears pouring down her cheeks she yelled " You can't kiss someone without any love behind it , damn it!" "Some girls get hurt when you kiss them you jerk!" She dropped to the floor. " I know you've done this with other girls and god, it hurts!" he tightly gripped her hands " Elena you don't understand, i really do love you." Elena rubbed her eyes. " And I love you too,more than anything in the world, but I don't know whether to trust you or not!" She buried her face in her hands. He held her wrists and slowly pulled her hands away from her face, "Elena you have to trust me , I  love you more then I've ever loved anyone." Elena looked at him sadly. "Why? Why would you love an unwanted idiot like me ?" He went an inch closer . " You're not unwanted , and you're not an idiot. I love you and no one else loves you like I love you." As he pulled her closer they both shared the night together loving each other intensely , not hesitating to show their affection for each other.

Author's Note

Please tell me if you think this short story is good enough, feel free to tell me if it does not reach your expectations , but please do not swear! :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good opening to a powerful story of love. You made me wish to know more. Would be a good introduction and now add the who, what, why, when and how of the love tale. Thank you for sharing the excellent story of love.
Coyote

[A.R. Rose]

Thank you, I will be sure to add those features in when i write the next part of the story, which shall be released very soon,

A.R. Rose

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad and you are welcome.