Camel

Just watched a documentary about camels

Living in drought, couldn’t find any green

Bear up under the heat without hat

There is no sign to going nowhere

Sand storm is chasing after

Face it with all might, never give up

Complaining is an unknown thing

Stand still and keep on walking

With strong intuition leads to the oasis

The heaven of the desert land

God’s small gift for the strongest ones

Author's Note

If you find grammar mistakes.. well.. I've been trying.. Pardon me.

Reviews

[Kelsey Schadt]

Living in drought, couldn’t find any green
Bear up under the heat without hat (I really enjoyed the imagery this line made me picture in my head)
There is no sign to going nowhere (This line is a little bit confusing with the double negative--consider revising)
Sand storm is chasing after
Face it with all might, never give up
Complaining is an unknown thing (Thing is a vague word, consider replacing with a more precise word)
Stand still and keep on walking
With strong intuition leads to the oasis
The heaven of the desert land
God’s small gift for the strongest ones (I like the success of the ending for the Camel)