Tree by the sea

I planted a tree

next to the sea

the green bits are you

the dead branches, me.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

awwwwwww so sad my friend! well done .. simple, precise, emotive and certainly paints a picture .. i think the childlike quality of the rhyming is too cool for school ;)
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[SleeplessVolcano]

Good to hear from you again buddy! It's a strange thing - how one can just wake up one morning and start writing poetry again :)

[Einstein Noodle]

i waiting for that day me self sir! ... just can't get the inspiration tho i have sort of started something .. just not sure where it is going to go..

[Green]

Awww, well I hope the tree continues on even if it might be struggling a bit. I feel like this can be interpreted so many ways; it's very complex to be so short, and that's pretty hard to do. Thank you for sharing.

[AYVID N]

A brief yet multilayered poem with a touch of sadness. The words speak to me of selflessness. As if one died to nourish the other. The chosen artwork is also beautiful.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

There are Bristlecone pines very near the sea, seemingly dead, that have lived for over five thousand years. Just because a thing seems a certain way does not make it so. Where there is life, there is hope. I enjoyed the read. F.

[Chris Shaw]

The image is beautiful, the brevity meaningful. So very nicely penned.

Chris

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you very much!