A door to my heart - senryu

A door to my heart - senryu

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

A hole in my heart
was that what you left me with?
No, a door, to mine.

© 2023 SleeplessVolcano


Author's Note

SleeplessVolcano
Hole in the Wall, a famous tourist attraction on the coast in South Africa.

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Very beautiful! The words AND the photo. I much enjoyed this work. I see you are new to
The Cafe. Welcome! I look forward to reading more of your thoughts. ~Sharon

Posted 1 Year Ago


SleeplessVolcano

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much. I'm not quite new, but I'm glad to be back.
Simply or deceptively simply beautiful. So much said with so few words.

Posted 1 Year Ago


SleeplessVolcano

1 Year Ago

Thanks Ken. I’m learning that less is more :)
😂 good the hole turned into a door
Knock knock 😂

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nisreen

1 Year Ago

Nisreen…….
SleeplessVolcano

1 Year Ago

Nisreen who…..
Nisreen

1 Year Ago

Nisreen ----- its me
Open up lol

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"In the end there doesn't have to be anyone who understands you. There just has to be someone who wants to". Robert Brault Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life. ~ Pablo Pica.. more..

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