Fire & Ice ~ Senryu

light blue hues of you

shine into my dark blue eyes - 

coloring blue hearts

Author's Note

Image = "Fire and Ice" by rpggamer15 on DeviantArt

Reviews

[fattycbreezy52]

Damnnnn. It's been a long time. Hope you remember me. Your guitar girl? Ughhhh. How you doin'?

[SleeplessVolcano]

Hey, blast from the past! Hehe.....Thanks for reading and popping in! Hope you are writing and singing and writing the script of your fame ;)

[fattycbreezy52]

Blast from the past. Love this phrase though xD

[Cassie]

awwww..this is so so beautiful..

[SleeplessVolcano]

Hey Cassie...glad you enjoyed it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words. They danced into perfect place. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[SleeplessVolcano]

Ahhhh..now your review stirs me to write a poem about the dance of words :)

Thanks for swinging by Coyote.....

[Coyote Poetry]

Dancing is always a muse for writing and you are welcome dear friend.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Now explain this riddle to me - I'm a musician and a writer, but I can't dance....??? ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Like it, but hearts plural?

[SleeplessVolcano]

Astute observation! I'd like to believe that the narrator's heart is not the only one being colored :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Fair enough, and blue blood to boot lol!