A glimpse of those piercing eyes - Senryu

The drink of your eyes,
Intoxicating delight -
Pour me one more glass.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Love the allegory here as many of us have fallen over due to both (and at times combined I guess!)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Ahhh, yes, that double whammy ;) Thanks for your apt observation :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

You've definitely given new meaning to the word "intoxication". Beautiful!

[SleeplessVolcano]

lol...Tx Kelly....for my sins I live in a "dry" country, i.e. no alcohol allowed, so intoxication has taken on new meanings ;)

[Chris Shaw]

A senryu so appropriate for Valentine's Day. Love very well expressed here. You can't get enough if it.

Chris

[SleeplessVolcano]

Ahhhh, yes, I haven't thought of Valentine's Day yet...lol....thanks for the positive words :) I'll walk by the florist today and see whether a whiff of red roses can't trigger something creative...;)

[Chris Shaw]

Whatever you do, don't forget Valentine's Day. I am in the dog house for forgetting our wedding anniversary! First time in 36 years lol.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Awww...you're still better off....ladies' dog houses are not as remote compared to where the guys are exiled to ;) But at least within my scatterbrain I do remember those important dates :)

[Chris Shaw]

I won't forget again, that's for sure!

[Mrudula Rani]

Sublime senryu. i hope she pours you one more glance !

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you! You know how busy life gets, but sometimes a stray gaze gets through the hazy mist of to-do-lists and deadlines.....

[Mrudula Rani]

I know what you mean, it is like an angel's caress.

[Coyote Poetry]

Outstanding use of words. A complete tale in so few words. I did like this one. Thank you my dear friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you my friend. Lately the only time I have for poetry are these shorter ones...glad you liked this one :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome.

[Ardra]

No photo :p
Good one Sleepless... your poems are always after drinking... ( must be the wine collector in you)
most of my poems are about getting lost... :p

[SleeplessVolcano]

Maybe it's only my imagination...;) Getting lost is not always that bad....;)

[Ardra]

Hmmm .... only wanting to stay lost is the issue... :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Ironically, some who are seemingly "lost" are in a better place that those who claim to be "found"....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh i really like this.

what a moment captured...and recaptured.
j.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks Jacob....glad you enjoyed it.