Nocturnal words ~ Senryu

Tonight the moon spoke

and told my darkness to leave

but sunrise lingered.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

it's the "but" in this that hooks me mind sir! the moon's glorious powers is to reflect the sun ...very romantic ... but deeper still its need in our darknesses ... well done says i!
E.

[Abhishek Izy]

That's heavy!! Loved it actually!

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words my friend. You made the reader believe and see. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Lorry]

So now there is the extra illumination to keep the darkness at bay, that you/we hoped for, for so long :)
Ps...does seeing the sun and moon at the same time melt your head too? Im like the confused 5 year old that I was when I first saw it. I usually just shake my head anf go back to bed until they've decided whos turn it is :)