Anticipation ~ Senryu

Anticipation ~ Senryu

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

You've pendulumed me
into this very moment - 
now let's make magic.


© 2018 SleeplessVolcano


Author's Note

SleeplessVolcano
I don't recall that I've seen the word "pendulum" used as a verb that much, but I think it works in this poem - feedback welcome :)

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To quote a song, “You raise me up to more than I can be”... truly, Pat

Posted 6 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Years Ago

Ahhh lovely song - I need to check again how to add a song and make it play automatically...I once k.. read more
The pendulum can be quite hypnotic so I'm wondering if you're under a spell of sorts? Lovely poem:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Years Ago

Hypnosis, likely, spells, optional ;)though I guess I have to avoid “eye-contact” with the pendu.. read more
This really does go well with the image, which suggests to me that someone believing in you makes you believe in yourself...which is not bad going for me, considering I have a fear of open water and falling from a great height, altgough to be honest, its more hitting the ground at speed that worries me. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Years Ago

Sometimes hitting the ground is exactly what we need ;) though doing so with a parachute may be a l.. read more

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