Come a bit closer

Come a bit closer

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

Glad to see you here
It's about time
that we enjoy
life's nectar, together

Yes, I know
we don't always fly
in the same breeze
but let's try again -
if you try, so will I.

Not far from here
I found a patch
of purple pelargoniums
right there, where we met.

How about it?
The wind's in our favor
come on
let's flutter
together.


© 2018 SleeplessVolcano


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I adore this poem where butterflies flutter together. truly, Pat

Posted 6 Years Ago


Reconnecting, a reunion, trying again in love. Sweet, thoughtful and hopeful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Years Ago

Thanks Dawn
Very sweet and cute poem.....:)
And they look cute together...all set for reunion...

Posted 6 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Years Ago

lol@ cute together.....
Reunions are always great ;)
A reunion, a chance to rekindle a romance. The purple pelargoniums a nice touch. The final stanza, one of hope. Nicely conveyed lines.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Years Ago

Indeed, with enough hope, we may just give positive change the impetus it needs. Thanks for review.. read more
Reunited with an old love, or love interest. Where the spark still is still very much alive. Quite romantic. Beautiful poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Papaya

6 Years Ago

You have added beautiful colour here. Tipping the scales.
SleeplessVolcano

6 Years Ago

Thank you. Those greys make us appreciate colors more...I'm focusing on putting 12 different reds i.. read more
Papaya

6 Years Ago

Who knew so many existed? I look forward to reading.

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Added on November 26, 2018
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