Intoxicating words ~ Senryu

At last her tongue found

a delicate soul, exposed -

I'm drunk on her words.

Reviews

[Ardra]

Good one sleepless :)
Love the title....And the closing line..

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you Ms Ardra....I feel like I'm cheating poetry a bit, only writing these short ones lately....but I just have time to sit and write longer pieces! You know that feeling? :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

have NO time, I meant :P

[Ardra]

Mmmm atleast you are writing.... I feel like words have vanished :)
I am trying to live in the real realm....than in the fantasy world... for a change...seems to be doing good to my soul....:)

[SleeplessVolcano]

In the realm of reality.....sounds better than "real realm"....sorry...but that could be the title of a poem :)

[Ardra]

Sounds like a wonderful title...:)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Oh I thought that you are going to write it :)

[Ardra]

RIM of reality....that's what I wrote..;) thanks for kicking the writing bug...

[Papaya]

I'm imagining that light-headed feeling you get and heart flutters when you are reading or speaking with someone who just has that certain je ne sais quoi that holds you enchanted

[SleeplessVolcano]

Exactly - i need to put "je ne sais quoi" in a poem :) Fluttering hearts are beautiful to behold and electrifying to experience....thanks for reviewing :)

[Lorry]

I am reminded of unexpected and new friendships with your words, where thoughts and opinions flow and you are surprised at uour similarity of thoughts, talking on and on, not wanting the night to end for fear of breaking the spell. no alcohol required :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

lol@ no alcohol required. I am an ex wine collector, and for my sins, I now live and work in a "dry" country. Sometimes in "normal" countries people never really learn how much fun one can have while sober :)

[Lorry]

True. I rarely drink these days, but I assure you, this is the wettest country on the planet. (Well, apart from Ireland maybe) :)