Some minds don't tick to the same clock ~ Senryu

Some minds don't tick to the same clock ~ Senryu

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

One-dimensional -
that, my dear, is what you are:
please don't spoil my cube.

© 2018 SleeplessVolcano


Author's Note

SleeplessVolcano
Wow, for a second I thought that the captcha, "symphyla" might add an ironic meaning to this poem, but I was wrong....I did learn a new word though...;)

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I wont upset your cube, but O do find it a tiny bit cramped
Can I make it a rectangular cube
Or may be a sphere

Posted 6 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Years Ago

I'm always open to "out-of-the-box" ideas :)
Wild Rose

6 Years Ago

Good > I dont like being in a box
cept one with no walls
Think that's called a field
Ha.. I like it, I like it a lot, it kind of makes sense in so many different ways, but then, it makes no sense at all.. if that makes any sense at all... just keep me in da loop would ya... cheers N

Posted 6 Years Ago


The part I love about this poem is how ironic it feels to be touting a cube over being one-dimensional. One is overly fussy & the other a bit shallow, but neither actually multi-dimensional. It's reminiscent of the way people with similar flaws throw stones at each other. I also agree with E (below) . . . I didn't know those captchas were real words! You are so inquiring, to actually google them! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


love the cubists! ;) i must admit ... i know that relationship my friend ... it can be so inhibiting and frustrating ... in the end i just shook me nog head and walked away :))))))))))
E.
ps. i didn't know that captcha knew any real words ;}

Posted 6 Years Ago


Well this is bloody brilliant. I picture you doing the whole drawing out the square, like Uma in pulp fiction, as she tells Vincent not to be a square :)
Some people just think in stereo, but this isn't just excellent, but its cool daddy-O too :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Years Ago

lol@ cool daddy-o....I'm still Googling for a pic to go with this one - now you've scrambled up my t.. read more
Lorry

6 Years Ago

Glad to be of assistance. :)

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