A flood of words ~ Senryu

Like a hurricane

your words thrash my stubborn shores

help me to listen.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Excellent. So much meaning in this senryu. Nicely executed. Layers on layers of thought.

Chris

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks Chris....Maybe I should writer a longer one about those layers....:)

[Chris Shaw]

You have certainly got plenty of material there to ponder on :)

[Einstein Noodle]

wow! well done sir! and help the speaker to slow down :)))))) but one can only change ones' self ... so teach me to listen ... really like this one .. so applicable and wise
E.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you big E! Yeah, you guessed it - I'm the stubborn one :) About slowing down, though, I can't testify yet....;)