Read me ~ Senryu

You opened me up

like a layered onion

now read my book, please.

Reviews

[Lorry]

Well with a title like that, it would be rude not to, so I did, and i'm glad to have found this little gem. These are the thoughts you see behind the eyes of someone who can fit so much into so few words. I hear it in my mind as a thought whisper, if that makes sense. Those times when speech only gets in the way.
Love it.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks Lorry. Glad that I was able to string together a few words containing more meaning than merely three lines. I am learning each day that brevity is the soul of wit! :)

[Lorry]

Well it only took me fifty years to figure it out too :)

[Kerdiwen Glass]

This invokes a lot of thought...
There's so many meanings to this, so many interpretations.
Wonderful.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Glad you saw that :) I am investigating how fewer words can say more, like the age old adage, "Less is more"......I am still learning...;)

[Kerdiwen Glass]

It was very good. Less is more is a good method in writing poetry. Vagueness. It leaves a mystery to things