An Honest Prayer

Oh God

it's me

how can I ask you

to move

your hand

to change the world

if I can't even

let you

change

me?

Reviews

[Onlyme]

This is powerful, crisp and makes you think and ponder.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks Dawn - I've been successful then :)

[Chris Shaw]

You've got to be a believer first, before you make special requests :) Brevity here, yet much to ponder on and debate.

Chris

[SleeplessVolcano]

True, though even the unfaithful could have sporadic bursts of faith...:)

Thank you for reviewing.

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome :)

[AYVID N]

I am blown away. So much said in so few words. Indeed, the change must come from within. Appreciated so much.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you so much :)

Great "Keep Calm" image!

Makes me think of the quote by Philip Massinger: "He that would govern others, first should be master of himself".

[AYVID N]

Oh yes! I’m so glad you appreciate! Thank you! 😀

[¿]

I've got to read an honest "honest prayer" today...grateful to you for writing this one...Thanks for sharing this, friend :)
We barely make any change in us and all time bowing to god for changing the world...irony!...

[SleeplessVolcano]

Tx Tahsin....irony indeed :)