Those waterfall eyes

Those waterfall eyes

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

My resistance crumbled
brick by brick
you broke down my walls
from the day
those waterfall eyes
flooded 
all
of
me

© 2018 SleeplessVolcano


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Beautiful- the force behind the waterfall test so gentle free and flowing- cascading waters of bliss- just beautiful🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


wow what unique set of eyes and maybe they really flow continuously which makes the heart be full of love and sympathy at the same time.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Waterfall eyes.... they sound like they keep overflowing all the time ... :)


Posted 6 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Years Ago

Hard to tell whether tears are joyful or traumatic ones.....right?
Ardra

6 Years Ago

True....hard to tell... :)
Ah, you've been hooked. Nicely done.

Best wishes

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

6 Years Ago

Could Be......some eyes can also distract or deceive.....tx for reviewing
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

You are welcome

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