Another whisper, please

Come whisper in my ear again
One of those delightful crumbs
Of delight
I promise to pick up each one
Until I find you, again
When our harmony
Rhymes again
Now will be a good time
My ears are tuned in
To your soothing
Whispers

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like this...i see it as the heart and spirit of a lover whispering over distance...but like that soft sound of the ocean waves, we hear it....that whisper and it brings us closer even when we are far from each other in physical proximity.
j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...it is a most tantalizing effect, isn't it? ; )

[SleeplessVolcano]

I hope so :)

[Ardra]

Can crumbs be whispers......
Makes me wonder.... nice poem

[SleeplessVolcano]

Good question.....Am happy go be proven right or wrong.....glad you popped in :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Oops to be

[Ardra]

Reminded me of recent poem posted by Phill... called bread crumbing I think that's what the name is...maybe you will like it

[SleeplessVolcano]

I will check it out.....one never knows where a trail of bread crumbs may lead.....