A colorful night to remember

Our words sang the blues

while our hearts

painted the town red

Our sonnets of telepathy

greened the cheeks of all would-be lovers

would it be a white lie

to say

that we rainbowed

the night away?

Reviews

[shockandawe]

One could only wonder what a rainbrowed night could be! Great work.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks for reviewing, shock :)

[Cryingkate]

Very Clever... Good One 1 What a Pot of Gold Indeed !

[SleeplessVolcano]

Kate! Great to see you here again.....Long time :)
Thanks for reviewing....please write something :)

[Cryingkate]

I miss you guys So much.... Life has been hard but I push on. I hope to write someday soon. I have to stop now and then to say I'm still alive and thinking of you. Much Love My friend.

[Kelly Scheppers]

There's no better time to live than for the present! Make it count!

[sette]

it maybe the truth or it maybe a lie but what makes the poem wonderful is the love shared by two and that is what counts.

[SleeplessVolcano]

so true...:) thank you for reviewing

[sette]

no problem

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Oh I saw laughter naughtiness music fun and not a care but daring hearts reminding me of overnight in Acapulco - some night need to be lived never ending only enjoying- I need a night like this again- great picture painted here- 🌹

[SleeplessVolcano]

yeah....we should never let too much time pass before we paint the town red...:) Thanks for reviewing...

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure- happy easter🌹

[wordman]

it would be proper,it seems you did

[SleeplessVolcano]

Tx wordman....I thought so too...:)

[wordman]

you`re welcome