Don't give up

Don't give up

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

Water that seed
of stubborn hope
Don't give up
Don't retreat
Hold on
Hold tight
Stay in the race
a few drops of perseverance at a time
and that seed will become your future
you never know
into what 
it may grow.


© 2018 SleeplessVolcano


Author's Note

SleeplessVolcano
The tallest trees in the world, I believe, are the Redwoods in California. Not sure whether this is a picture of that specific one, but I'm sure it's close. It is rumored to be 106m tall. So our dreams can grow up to be quite big one day....;)

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Oh ya! What a great poem to start the morning. Hope and perseverance are a great combo! Enjoyed this read, the words flowing and concise. Cheers!

Posted 6 Years Ago


yes this is one positive and inspiring poem, it does not only tell about hope but also about life as well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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May grow in success! Lovely writing. 😊

Posted 6 Years Ago



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