A wave of fatigue ~ senryu

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

It snuck up on me -
Tornadoes of tiredness,
Sucking out all strength.

© 2018 SleeplessVolcano

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Phill Oz O'fee

I can relate - love and enjoy Senryu - yours is a good read!

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

tx phil.....I've grown to love this format too :)

barleygirl

Good use of alliteration within the allotted 17 syllables! I love the way your word choices are powerful & dynamic, even tho the message is not. That's the way it can feel sometimes, bowling one over! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Tx Margie for your positive comments! I use (and sometimes abuse, hehe) poetry as therapy, so as som.. read more

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Added on March 11, 2018
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"In the end there doesn't have to be anyone who understands you. There just has to be someone who wants to". Robert Brault Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life. ~ Pablo Pica.. more..