A thirst for more than knowledge ~ senryu

Keen hearts, hungry minds -

super-absorbent sponges:

drinking wisdom's punch.

Reviews

[ZakLeonRamsey]

I like it. It's rather good, but a little short if I'm going to be honest, but who cares if the poem is small or large, a poem is still a poem, good job.

[SleeplessVolcano]

A senryu is short, because that is the style:
first line 5 syllables
second line 7 syllables
third line 5 syllables

Thanks for commenting :)

[ZakLeonRamsey]

Oh, well now I know. No problem :)