Breathless ~ Senryu

Breathless ~ Senryu

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

Exasperating ~
you suck the air from my lungs
give me some space, please.

© 2018 SleeplessVolcano


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Some how when I read this...Reminded me of...
Confucian lovers' advice #65 :p

Exasperating - mmm is a nice word :)
Maybe you need a tank of oxygen...

Posted 6 Years Ago
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"In the end there doesn't have to be anyone who understands you. There just has to be someone who wants to". Robert Brault Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life. ~ Pablo Pica.. more..

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