Kiss me, I’m sinking

Your tumultuous squall
Washed over me
I had to drop my anchor
Keep sending those chilling waves
I may just linger longer
In this Bermuda Triangle
Of our chaotic love.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful thoughts and wishes in the poetry. When love overtake us. A perfect chaotic place. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

[Mrudula Rani]

What a zen way to deal with tumultuous squalls! Some times just accepting the chaotic love and just sitting out the storm helps a relationship! You paint expansive images with minimal effort. Love your style and Your writings.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Tx Mrudula.....yeah, I like that image....sitting out the storm....sounds like the title of a new poem :)

[Mrudula Rani]

I will be waiting to read your new poem(s). All the best

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Lingering longer is the way to be when love engulfs you and doesn’t want to set you free- to welcome it and get lost within its captivating chaos andctruly become one with eachother is where we’ll find complete unity and the becommingbof one out of two - wonderful words of understanding 🌹

[SleeplessVolcano]

Isn't it ironic? Chaos giving us understanding...:) Suffering produces character, and character, hope.......and enough hope leads to faith, right? :)
Thanks so much for reviewing.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

It is so well said..life teaches many lessons if you are ready to learn🌹

[Ardra]

Sounds very chaotic the Bermuda triangle ...
I had to Google, tumultuous squall... first it sounded like tequila heheh.... two shots n lime.. :p ... should help ease the trouble I think ... for a night at least...when you come over I will buy you a bottle heheh... should help with the troubled waves.

[SleeplessVolcano]

I don’t drink tequila so I’d have to take your word for it ;) Trouble can also make us stronger, right? :)

[Ardra]

Yes...you will have to take my word for it...
Ya u only prefer champagne lol..
Mmm isit trouble n trouble we getting stronger lol...reminds me of red label tea.... strong rich color...nice aroma ..

[SleeplessVolcano]

minus ten points for using the word "nice"...:P

[Ardra]

Nice...
Very nice...
Sooo Nice hahahah :p
I was supposed to get a poem on nice ... then I will stop using the word nice...no pinky promise ( how many marks now)