Flowing thoughts

The heat of the sun

melted my frozen dreams

The sound of rushing water

is food to my hungry soul

All I need now

is courage

for that mind-numbing

waterfall

around the bend

of new beginnings.

Reviews

[Ardra]

mmmm .... if this goes on you are going to keep writing poetry all life long :P
and i could just sit and suggest new titles :)
what did you have for break fast lol ... extra jug of coffee ???

[SleeplessVolcano]

Better stick to your tea then...:P

[Ardra]

hmmmm would you prefer a cup...with mint :P
mmm helps you get over hangover.... better any day than coffee....

[Pooja Chintamani]

This is what's everyone wants. Really hain blowing and soul nourishing..

[SleeplessVolcano]

Tx Pooja for your kind review.