Next time

I'll listen more

and speak less

I'll be a shoulder

without preaching

I'll not be penny wise

and pound foolish -

winning little battles of image

but losing the war of love

Next time - 

I'll step out

of my comfort zone - 

expect nothing

but give my all

if only life

would give me

a next time.

Reviews

[sette]

there will definitely a next time because we always have the chances we ask for. this is good writing.

[Ardra]

I think i am in love with this poem.....
n mmm :) don't we all wish we had a second chance..
i would have never come up with such lines...
i love when you are in that zone hehe neon lights and your thoughts just flow...
i would just sit and read all of that comes out of that beautiful head of urs heheh :P

[SleeplessVolcano]

I need to thank your canary :P

thank you for your kind comments.....mmm....lol...next title, "Flowing thoughts".....

[Ardra]

mmm you can , when she flies past the desert for a drink you can.. make sure to keep the bird bath ready...
looking fwd to flowing thoughts..
(next one maybe looking fwd lol )