Even love has a grave ~ Senryu

In your heavy seas

my soul capsized with the wind - 

love's watery grave.

Author's Note

Image = Sunken Ship, from Deviant Art

Reviews

[Emma]

The suspended sinking to the bottom of the ocean, a victim of love, graceful and gentle but more deadly as the pressure increases and the light from the surface disappears. You created an extremely vivid image for me.

[Ardra]

Water can be a very soothing grave... even for love..
when there is no peace to be found anywhere else..
that's what i always felt..