Silent words

She slammed the door
Of the chat room
So hard
That my words crashed
Like old software
And I was left speechless
In a place
Where words live
And breathe
And are born
Each second
In silence I sat
And read excited words of others
While I just existed
And simmered in the juices
Of my unspoken words

Reviews

[Amanda Moubarak]

Well said. Really beautiful. I'm a girl with few words myself so i could relate. Well done :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you for reviewing. I've found that less is often more....and it applies to words too....:)

[Ardra]

Maybe possible the chat room door was damaged....
or maybe it was the door of your heart... you heard..

[SleeplessVolcano]

who knows - sometimes we hear not what is truly there, but what we want to hear....

Thank you for reviewing.

[sette]

the poem about chat rooms and your experience makes it a good poem there is the natural flow of words written and clarity of the message of the poem.

[SleeplessVolcano]

tx sette for your kind comments.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha speak up or shut up eh!? ;) i like this very much...so many tangents i am streaking down between your lines..the cadence was so natural for me to connect with ... oh how those chats rooms can explode, implode and turn to rend in a flash!!!!! you are braver than i to tread there Sleepless!
E.

[SleeplessVolcano]

hehe......sometimes these places where angels fear to tread.....:) Maybe brave is not the right word....rather, rash.....:P But if it does not kill us, it makes us stronger, right? :P

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ......one hopes so my friend