Bird's eye love

A soothing ointment, curing ancient wounds - 

that's what your words are to me.

Come whisper them again, like before,

and I promise - this time I'll listen.

I confess; I'm as stubborn as a dozen mules,

but yet, you love me,

despite my rock-hard foolishness.

Give me another chance

to open my wayward ears

and drink deeply.

Your hand-picked words

will lift my soul once more

and I'll meet you, above all of this,

with a bird's eye view

of morning-dew love.

Reviews

[B]

Just lovely
Really !!!
You done a great job of spreading your soul in through the word

[SleeplessVolcano]

:) I believe I can fly ;)

[B]

It's about time :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Time will tell, the expression goes. Sometimes time is like an ancient building....it speaks long after we think it stopped ticking :)

[B]

And those who truly believe in someone
time is nothing
but background noise

[SleeplessVolcano]

Ahhh...background noise....now that prompt just triggered one and a half poems....

[B]

Lol
I got used to your humor
Or sarcasm
Background noise
As In It matters little against how you feel :p

[Einstein Noodle]

well done Sleepless ... every word that you chose is savory and carries weight ... i appreciate your attention to punctuation .. to me, though I am not an English Major .. it is spot on .. guides me and allows me to feel the imprint of each phrase and line .. its a very beautiful love poem in my mind ..so well done indeed!
E.
ps what is that squiggly birds eye line ... the photo is mesmerizing ..but that line has me wondering ;)

[An owl on the moon]

It is the most sublime joy to find someone who speaks healing and life into us, and who knows us in our stubborn ways, our foolishness, and will stay close anyways. How beautiful and lifting this is, showing us all what truly matters in a world of a million, million voices. It is a reason to dance.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Indeed.....truly an out of this world experience....:)

Thanks for your review.

[An owl on the moon]

Those are often the best experiences... :)