Blown into the water ~ senryu

Your riptide of words
Churned our love's undercurrent
We're taking water

Reviews

[B]

To Love
Is to be tested
Like the uncanny waves of seas to come
The ships that pass through with those two passengers on board are the only ones that have stood the test of truth
That love was really genuine for all it stood for and all it would become.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you for your kind words

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Very expressive and creative write! This is my style of writing – loved it! :-)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you very much......I never really liked any "form" poetry, i.e. rhyming, or keeping to any guidelines, because I prefer free writes, but I do think we hone our skills more when we "force" ourselves to write something traditional....I guess there is a balance.......a little bit of the "old" and a little bit of "the new"......:)