A strong tower

A strong tower

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano

A safe zone
no signal
from those
wanting to hack
my vulnerable heart

A safe tower
I can run to
And not fear dread
Because the rock
inside
and the stones
surrounding
become my fortress
of faith

Here, I can rest
safely, restoring my soul
while the author of my being
repairs the broken pages
of forgotten memories.


© 2017 SleeplessVolcano


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Beautiful and profound. I thought your use of the word "hack" was interesting because it can mean different things but both are applicable -To hack as in tear and destroy, or to hack, as in to penetrate by insidious means.

I love your line ""The author of my being."

Your words reminded me of king David's expressions in the Psalms of the Bible where he describes God as his fortress.

Well written.

Moomin

Posted 5 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I was indeed inspired by a few of David’s Psalms.
well done says i! the up to date metaphor and sparking not only Faith but my imagination as well is a smooth blend ..so many references in the Bible about the Lord as a strong tower ... all offer the experience your poem describes ... the comfort and acceptance one finds there are immeasurable and priceless ... thanks for sharing my friend
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

7 Years Ago

you are welcome. I'll keep the back door open, though I think you have your own already...;)

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