When kites fall in love

It began that day

when our kites got caught in that random wind

our happy words fell to the ground

but our hearts continued

frolicking in pure white clouds.

It ended that day

when I let the anchor down

on my wayward heart

and sought shelter in peaceful harbors

far away from your magnetic currents.

For you, I wish open skies

and horizons

to fill compass-less vision.

For me, I wish many rainbow-colored dreams too

but this time I'd rather not share them

just in case

my kite runs on the rocks,

again.

Reviews

[SOUL LESS]

The title is brilliant, that's what got me reading in the first place. The poem is beautiful.

but this time I'd rather not share them
just in case
my kite runs on the rocks,
again.

Wow.

Thanks for sharing! Keep writing.

[SleeplessVolcano]

thanks soul less. I will....:)

[Tony Jordan]

The title alone creates a sigh in the heart SV.
To wish the best for those we truly love no matter how things turn out between us - well that's just the definition of pure love right there.
Beautiful writing.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks Tony. We can always make the most of it, no matter how it turns out, right? :)

[Tony Jordan]

Yes. Like those transformers we can morph into something that likes terra firma. :)

[CherieLamour]

Well put my friend. I can truly relate to this one and understand sometimes how thoughts and dreams are better left as personal thought... or silent temptations that are reviewed and left on the shore amid the other sparkling gems.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Ahhhh...you understand so well :)

[CherieLamour]

Yes I do. :-)

[Pax]

Due to some painful memories, our fears grows unable us to fall into the rainbow colored dreams again... well put, my friend...

[SleeplessVolcano]

Great to see you again buddy. Thanks for your kind comment!

[Bacchus]

Ahhh to remember the day my then boyfriend said let's go fly a kite... Got it stuck in a tree... But there is something so simply romantic about kites. No wonder he's my husband now.

I really like this piece.

[B]

The thing with flying a kite you are meant to never know
To just throw it in the air and watch it take you somewhere

That's what makes flying kites so much fun

Good one !!!

[SleeplessVolcano]

What goes up, must come down, right? :)

Tx for reviewing Solo......

[B]

What turns left must go right
It's a pleasure buddy

[SleeplessVolcano]

Not in the traffic I'm in on a daily basis ;)

[B]

Oh i do find a left and right always
i miss driving
or in my case formula one on the road lol