Petals of love

I charged my heart

with the words

you spoke

Please don't be silent

or else

I may run

out of love.

Reviews

[Zoya]

Beautiful and strong at the same time! It's always great to see how some writers convey their feelings to their readers in just few lines. There's so much beyond these words, I can feel it. Very well written!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks Zoe.....I am experimenting with a few longer writes now....:) But I get distracted with life.....maybe that is a poet's curse.....ahhhh....a poem title...."The Poet's curse"....see, distraction can be good too....:P

[Zoya]

haha, I agree. And you're welcome!

[CherieLamour]

Wow! Such deep romance in your words. Love it!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Hey my friend. What a blessing for you to comment on my humble words :). Please write something for me to review :)

[CherieLamour]

I will... you know time always bring me back to the pen... and to good friends too.

[B]

I really enjoyed reading this one. It's very pretty :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Glad you enjoyed it, solo....

[B]

Oui oui bien sûr

[Coyote Poetry]

Soft and powerful use of words and thoughts. I agree. We need a steady flow of the words of love and concern. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks John.....there is something magical about love, hey? :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right and you are welcome.