Glitching heart

My heart glitched again

when your face big-screened

on the home page

of my off-line soul.

Author's Note

captcha = swooned :)

Reviews

[SOUL LESS]

To me, romance is romance, be it online or AFK. It's that feeling when your heart skips a beat and your brain stops working. All the cliches begin to make sense and all those people you've mocked for falling in love: well you won't ever again. Because now you know: love is not really a choice, for else who would choose a path of such exquisite pain?

It is perhaps fortunate that IMs don't show how long one has been staring at a message, because that would cause a lot of trouble :D

[ms. barrie]

amazing perceptive on the woes of cyberspace relationships//crushes. the title of this gem caught my attention. very creative/unique play on words & imagery that even though this is a short piece...speaks volumes

thank you for sharing - x

[SleeplessVolcano]

Tx ms. barrie :) I am dabbling in shorter poetry now until I am confident that I can do a longer one....:)

[ms. barrie]

you're most welcome, Sleepless Volcano, the pleasure was all mine :)