Rivers of honey ~ senryu

She's gushing again

sweet syrupy whiffs of love

escaping her lips

Author's Note

Image = Alwaysraincheck by Isabella, from deviant art.

Reviews

[V]

I like this sweet senryu, felt and sensual. Very nice choice of words. I also like the picture you added to your poem. The colors and sort of lasciviously thoughtful facial expression of the woman are matching your poem perfectly.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Tx Vanessa.....it is hard sometimes to find a suitable picture....maybe one day I will use my own photos / drawings :)

[V]

I can imagine.. My imaginations are pretty abstract and wild so I stay away mostly from adding pics to my writings. That would be really nice if you did that.

[B]

Really pretty
shes very beautiful
and your words also

i love the artist

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks Nisreen. One day I'm gonna learn how to draw / paint / sculpt.....creativity needs more ways to flow through.....

[B]

i want to sculpt
thats a very sensual form of releasing emotion
yes i will find classes
thanks for that :)