Touch me ~ 6 words

Touch me -

I burn

spontaneously

alone.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

all kinds of sensuous imaginings are conjured ...such a contrast ...."Touch me" ... but do i need you? .. burning alone as the speaker does .. perhaps the "burn" is more ominous hurtful ..needs the touch to heal ... i keep re-reading as i am writing this review ..i am left in conflict every time ... hmmmmmmmmm! so good job says i! i am hooked by this 6 word poem ...
E.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Aahhhhh....big E...your comments also makes my poems seem larger than life...:P It is quite a lovely irony......writing longer poems.....then a shorter one......then a VERY short one....they all contribute to sharpening our poetic voices.....we should do a duet again one of these days when I have more time than sunshine left in a day....I do not have the luxury of ample time like you....:P

[Einstein Noodle]

never give up the effort ...i kept giving my dream back to God as i did what i could to be able to retire ...the modesty of middle class makes it seem impossible at times ..but came the day i heard the Lord say ...get moving ...your dream awaits ;) any time will be good for me sir...our breakfast nook is a favorite of my own ;0